All of the kids love to play in the snow
They wake up to the blinding sparkling white
They run down the stairs and get ready to go
They put on their coats to prevent the bite
They rush out of the door into the wind
They go to grab their worn out beaten sleds
They go to find the hill with the big bend
The snow falls gently on their wool capped heads
Their small hearts pound in their chest as they run
They reach the spot they had been searching for
Now at the top, they shoot off like a gun
They hit a bump and know they will be sore
But they keep going and going all day
Up then down, and then back up to the top
They do not notice the sky has turned grey
They notice the change in time; time to stop
Their fingers and toes have no more feeling
They have slowly been chilled deep to the bone
Now it’s back to the warmth for its healing
They walk into the door and hear the phone
Now it’s time for the hot chocolate
Warming themselves deep in their soft bedding
Feeling happy finding the thrill they sought
Looking forward to more days of sledding
Great Job Nicholas. You used the iambic pentameter and rhyme scheme and to perfection.
ReplyDeletevery nice, nick!
ReplyDeleteGood poem Nick! You had really good word choice.
ReplyDeleteNicely done your use of the romanticism is properly done, and you managed to accurately use Iambic pentameter.
ReplyDeleteGood job Nick! Your Iambic pentameter was perfect and your choice of wording was great.
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